Feedback for Beth's Draft Evaluation

In question 1, try to be more precise about the way you have deployed these conventions in your thriller. In question 2, try to address the issue of gender via the different way that male and female characters are represented. In question 2, think a bit more about other possible reasons why Hollywood is the most likely institution to produce a feature film thriller. What are the factors involved with making thrillers, that mean it is best suited to Hollywood? Overall, the content of your answers is good, but you need to go into more detail in each one, because currently the word count is half what it should be in the final submission.