Feedback for Nicola's Draft Evaluation

The content of your answers is good so far, but more detail in the expression of each one is required throughout as so far the total word count is only half what it will need to be in the final submission. In question 2, try and address the different way that your thriller represents gender, based on the differences between the male and female characters. Also, you need to proof read for typos as I have spotted a few errors.